Make automated emails feel human
Your welcome emails rewritten to get replies, plus a no-pitch check-in.
Here are my welcome emails: [paste them] Rewrite them so each one feels like a personal note from me to one person: - Plain text, sent from my own name - Short sentences, one question per email - A personal P.S. (something about my week, my work or my life: [a detail]) - Lowercase subject lines that sound like a friend, for example "was it useful?" - Remove anything that sounds like a company or a newsletter Then write one extra check-in email with no links and no pitch, that people will want to reply to.
When to use it
- Use it when your welcome emails get opens but no replies, or sound like they come from a company. Paste the emails you have now. You get them back as personal notes, plus a check-in with no pitch.